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Re: The Altonville Mystery

Tue Oct 18, 2016 10:24 pm

I wish I had a theory to throw out! The story is fantastic Dom and I have no idea what is coming next.

I don't think The Controller is the one in charge so the big question is who is?

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Wed Oct 19, 2016 8:14 am

I've been given a voice \:D/

Well the story is unfolding nicely, but it seems we're still no closer to having our questions answered!

Clearly the Hamble Twins and the controller aren't working side by side, I think this could be an inside job, one of our characters might not be as innocent as they seem :-k
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Wed Oct 19, 2016 7:02 pm

Chapter 14

Justin awoke in a dark room. He couldn't see anything it was that dark. All he could hear was a drip above his head. "Anybody there?" he called out. "Justin, is that you," replied a voice. "Amber. Thank god. Are you ok? Are you hurt?" he asked. "No i'm fine. Have you seen Lakey?" she asked. "No, sorry, I haven't." he replied. Suddenly a noise came from outside the room. The door flew open and Viktor and Elsie were stood there. Viktor pointed a knife towards Justin and Elsie ran over to him and started stroking his face. "What a lovely boy. Lets have some fun." She grabbed his hair and dragged him out the room, leaving Amber with Viktor. He walked over to and sat on the floor in front of her, staring. "What do you want," Amber asked. Viktor placed the knife sideways across her mouth. "Don't speak. It will just ruin this moment," he replied. All off a sudden the screams of Justin could be heard through the walls. Amber burst into tears. This made Viktor happy. Smirking, he pushed the hair out of Amber's face. "Now now. Don't cry," he said. He put his hand in his pocket and pulled out a crushed flower. He handed it to Amber. "Thank you," she said. "See. I'm not going to hurt you," he said. Amber stopped crying. "No. I'm just going to kill you," he said, shoving the knife deep into Amber's chest. He pulled it out and Amber fell to her side. He got up and opened the door. Elsie returned with a beaten Justin. She threw him into the room. Seconds later Viktor returned an threw an unconscious Lakey into the room too. "Well done Viktor," Elsie said and she closed the door.
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Wed Oct 19, 2016 7:27 pm

Oooh, didn't expect Amber to die! Looking forward to the next chapter!
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Wed Oct 19, 2016 7:33 pm

Noooo - poor Amber :cry:

Why did Viktor kill her? If He and Elsie aren't working with The Controller then what purpose could they have in killing Amber? It seems strange that Justin would be allowed to live, why not just kill him too? Where was Lakey during all this - we know she was thrown unconscious into the room at the end, but why was she kept separate from Justin and Amber to start with?
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Wed Oct 19, 2016 7:42 pm

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Noooo - poor Amber :cry:


I find it funny how you're more upset about Amber dying than yourself been beaten up and knocked unconscious :lol
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Wed Oct 19, 2016 8:06 pm

Will Lakey die? Is there a connection between Amber and Lakey involving the witchcraft? So many questions! :lol
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Wed Oct 19, 2016 8:52 pm

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Noooo - poor Amber :cry:


I find it funny how you're more upset about Amber dying than yourself been beaten up and knocked unconscious :lol


Well I am still alive (for now) so I think on balance I'm in a better position than Amber. Plus if it wasn't for Amber Justin may never have found the tomb and if he hadn't found the tomb I'd still be under the control of The Controller and being forced to do evil deeds. Now I just hope we can find out why Amber had to die :(
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Thu Oct 20, 2016 7:00 pm

Chapter 15

Justin crawled over to Lakey. "Lakey wake up," he whispered as he pushed her. She awoke with a start. "Whats going on?" she asked. Justin explained what had happened. "Oh no. Amber!. I can't believe they did that," she said. She started getting angry. "Lakey calm down. I don't want you going all evil on me," he said. Lakey relaised she was getting angry and tried to calm herself down. Suddenly a noise came from outside the room. The door flew open and Elsie and Viktor were stood in the door way. "Aww, Were you crying over the dead girl. How silly," Viktor laughed. "Shut up," Justin shouted. Elsie and Viktor laughed. They kept mocking the death of Amber and Lakey was getting increasingly angry over. "SHUT UP!" she suddenly shouted. Viktor and Elsie's faces dropped. Lakey stood up. "What gives you the right to harm a fellow human being. Your just evil. You get a kick out of being horrible and horrendous people." She raised her hands and the twins went flying backwards into a wall knocking them out. "Come on Justin, lets get out of here." She helped him up and escorted him outside. They came out at the farm. She helped Justin into a stable. "Wait here. There is something I need to do," she said. She disappeared. She went back to the where the twins were knocked out. She raised her hand and they went flying into the room. She locked the door. She looked up at a CCTV camera. "I know your watching. They are all yours"
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Thu Oct 20, 2016 7:13 pm

Dean did it. :lol

Loving the story so far, very intense and gripping!
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Mon Oct 24, 2016 7:00 pm

Chapter 16

Lakey arrived back at the farm house. Justin was sat there. "You alright?" he asks her. Lakey nods. "Why the hell did the Controller send those killers after us?" Justin asked her. "He didn't. But they have been dealt with." Justin gave her a look. "Well at least everyone will be safe from those killers. Now what?" Lakey sat down next to him. "I guess we need to stop the Controller. And I think I know how," she said. She helped Justin up and and they headed towards the tomb. An hour later they arrived and TheSmilerMan was waiting for them. "What are you doing here?" Justin asked him. "I asked him to come," Lakey replied. The three of them went into the tomb to the room with the jars in. "Damn. He's taken one of them," Lakey said. "There are still two in here though. Is that enough to help with your plan?" Justin asked. She nodded. TheSmilerMan and Justin each walked over to a jar and picked them up. Two creatures suddenly appeared out of no where. "Smash them," Lakey said. They threw the jar against a wall and smashed them. The creatures started changing. Stood there was NemeJaney and Owen. "How did I get here?" Owen asked. "Long story," Justin replied laughing. Lakey walked over to NemeJaney. "You know you don't belong here. I need to send you back," she said. "I understand," she replied. Lakey raised her arm and sent her back. "What do you mean she didn't belong here?" Justin asked her. "The Controller summoned her from the past, before she became the experimentation of the Nemesis Virus. He wanted such a wonderful creature from the past to be one of his minions. So she doesn't belong here. Unlike you lot." She explained. "So Lakey, what's the plan?" asked TheSmilerMan. "We need to destroy his utopia!"
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Chapter 17

"What do you mean we have to destroy his utopia?" Owen asked. "We need to destroy Altonville. Its the only thing he cares about," Lakey replied. "But what about the Controller. It won't stop him. He will just rebuild" Justin said. "He also needs to be dealt with. He has killed so many people. Capt Barnacles, Morgan, Liam. Plus many other villagers in the past. He is a menace and needs to be stopped. But destroying his utopia will only weaken him. This is why we needed to free the creatures. But it looks like he has already thought that far ahead. We do need to make one more stop. We need to go to the motel," she said. All four of them headed out of the tomb and made their way to the other side of the village where the motel is. They arrived just after dusk. "Why are we here?" Owen asked. Lakey looked around. "Over there," she said pointing towards room 13. They walked over and entered the room. It was just an ordinary motel room. "There's nothing here," Justin said. Lakey walked over to a picture on the wall. She pressed it in and it slid up revealing a safe. She waved her hand over the safe and it popped open. She grabbed out the items that were inside. She put them on the bed. They started looking through the bits. It was plans of the village and how it is protected from the outside world and how only lost souls can find the place. Suddenly the bathroom door exploded off its hinges, hitting TheSmilerMan and knocking him out. The other three stood up and saw the Controllers minion. "Lakey," just shouted. Lakey spun on the spot but wasn't quick enough. The creature threw her out the window. Owen was nearest the door so ran outside to check on Lakey leaving Justin in the room. The creature lunged at him and slit his throat killing him.
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Tue Oct 25, 2016 7:57 pm

No, not Justin too :cry: With him and Amber now gone that's the two people who saved me dead :( Could the fact they saved me be the reason they both died?

It seems the Hamble Twins were merely a distraction, although we still don't know how they got to Altonville, unless it was simply a case they were lost souls who found their way to the village.

What we have had confirmed is that The Controller was responsible for the death of Morgan and Liam so it's obvious that he didn't want Justin and Amber to find the tomb and release me from his control. The Controller must know what the plan is which is why he took the jar to control the last remaining minion and is now trying all he can to stop his utopia from being destroyed. However, surely the best way to have done that was to have had his minion kill me, so why did the minion only throw me from the room? Could it be a way of The Controller reminding me he still holds the real power, or does he need me alive and is therefore trying to eliminate those who are helping? Is it possible he has a way to bring me under his control again and just needs the right opportunity to do it? Just who is The Controller - we still don't know if it's someone we've already met, a past resident, or someone we've yet to encounter.
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Wed Oct 26, 2016 8:02 pm

Sorry for the slight delay in this chapter

Chapter 18

Justin's body lay in a heap on the floor. Lakey and Owen arrived back in the room and were shocked to see Justin had been killed. Owen walked over to help TheSmilerMan up as he just came too. "I forgot how powerful we were when we were those creatures," He said. "Oh crap. He killed Justin. Maybe we shouldn't be doing this. The Controller obviously wants us dead so his utopia will survive." Lakey sat on the bed. "I don't want any more death. The couldn't handle it if anyone else was to die in this village because of him. You lot need to leave the village and leave the Controller to me," she said. "No! We can't leave you to deal with it," Owen said. "I'm sorry," she said. She raised her hand and Owen and TheSmilerMan vanished from the room. Lakey took a deep breath and stood up. She looked up at the corner of the room. "I'm coming for you. And you're going to loose!" She walked out the motel room and walked across the car park. She turned back, raised her hand and the motel room caught fire. She headed off into the dark as the motel erupted in smoke and fire. The Controller had watched everything. He started laughing. "Oh dearie. You think you can stop me. Hahahahaha. Such a ridiculous thing to say." He stood up and walked over to the creature. "Make sure she doesn't get into the building."
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Thu Oct 27, 2016 7:00 pm

Chapter 19

Lakey walks through the village to get to the old army base and notices that everyone is in their gardens watching her. She carries on walking and notices that they are also following her. As she approaches the village square the crowd is so big they stop her moving any further. "What is wrong with you lot?" she asks. No one replies. They just stand there blocking her path, all of them staying silent while they do. She tries to push her way through the crowd but to no success. Out of no where the sky goes dark and the Controller's minion appears on the fountain. "I can not let you go any further," the creature says, surprising Lakey, but she recognized the voice. "Now now. That's not a nice way to treat your wife," she says. "Why have you sent your pet. Scared to face me?" she said. The Controller laughs. "Why would I waste my time on someone so........ good" he said. "Hence why I've sent my pet. It was nice knowing you dearie. Get her," he said. The creature lunged towards Lakey. She raised her hands and protected herself sending the creature flying into the fountain. The crowd of people started to move closer and closer to her. Suddenly the sound of a engine came roaring ever closer. Owen and TheSmilerMan drove into the crowd of people, forcing them to get out of the way. "Get in," Owen shouted. Lakey jumped into the car and they drove off. "How did you find me?" she asked. "You may have sent us away, but we knew you would need help, so here we are. Now lets go finish this," Owen said. "Wait," Lakey said. TheSmilerMan slammed on the break. Lakey jumped out and ran to the creature. She raised her hands and the creature transformed into Jack. "Jack. This is only temporary. Run! Get to the mine. I will save you from this curse."


With only 4 more chapters left, have you solved the mystery? Do you know who the Controller is? Do you know how its going to end?
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Chapter 20

Lakey ran back to the car and jumped in. "Jack was the other minion?" Owen asked. "Yes he was and I need to find that jar and break it. He's gone to the mines. Drop me off near the base and then head there. There is a way out the village that you must take," she explained. "No questions. You will leave this village." The tone in her voice was serious and both Owen and TheSmilerMan agreed. They dropped Lakey off near the army base. "Good luck Lakey" they both said and they drove off leaving her alone. She slowly made her way to the entrance. The Controller was stood at the gate waiting for her. "You witch!" He shouted at her. "Oh grow up you petty little man," she shouted back. The Controller laughed. "You won't achieve what your here to do dearie," he said as Lakey got closer. "I guess we will just have to find out," she replied, smirking. "I would let you in, but spoilers." The Controller laughed and vanished in a puff of black smoke. "Really? You want to play this game?" She huffed. She raised her hand and the gates flew off their hinges. She walked into the base and headed straight to where she thought he would be. She reached the room but he wasn't there. She was in the control room. She looked at the CCTV and noticed that the village was still full of people. She looked at the other screens and saw the Controller at the entrance to the mine. "No!" she said. She raised her hands and vanished.
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Sat Oct 29, 2016 11:23 am

As we're getting closer to the end we do finally seem to be getting some answers. We now know that The Controller was responsible for all of the deaths except for DannyG, who was killed by Dan; Amber, who was killed by the Hamble Twins; and Dan, who was killed by myself, although I was under the control of The Controller so you could argue The controller was ultimately responsible for Dan's death.

It now seems that the mines could play a key part in how this mystery is going to play out, why did I tell Jack to run to the mines and just what is this way out of the Village down there which I directed TheSmilerMan and Owen to take? Clearly The Controller doesn't want whatever is in the mines to be discovered otherwise why go to the effort to distract me so he could go there? Or is The Controller heading to the mines just a tactic to draw everyone away from his base?

Then of course there is The Controller himself. Just who is he? I've got a feeling that we may know him but it's not who we'd expect. Could it be that they've been with us all along and no one has realised?

What does everyone else think? It'd be good if we could get some guesses in here over the weekend to see if we can work out together who The Controller really is!
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Sat Oct 29, 2016 6:59 pm

Chapter 21

Owen and TheSmilerMan had approached the mine and found Jack. "Jack!" Owen said. Jack smiled. "We need to find the way out that Lakey was on about," TheSmilerMan said. They headed into the mine. It was very dimly lit. "Why are the lanterns alight?" asked Jack. "These mines haven't been in use for years," he said. They turned a corner and walked into a giant room. Inside there was a giant glass water chute. "What the hell?" Owen said. "What are these?" he asked. "They are what the miners used to clean the dirt," came a voice. "****!" blurted out Owen. "What the hell are you doing here and what's happened with Lakey?" He shouted at the Controller. "Nice to see you too. Hahaha. Anyhow, before you rudely interrupted me, The chutes were used to wash the dirt to find precious metals, but I felt the wooden look was a bit dated so I upgraded them to be fabulous for no reason what so ever. Oh and don't worry. Your friendly neighborhood witch is fine, for now, but I knew she would send you down here. So I came here to stop you lot leaving the village. No one leaves my village!" He raised his cane and Jack started to change back into the creature. Jack let out an almighty scream and his transformation had finished. He lurched towards Owen and TheSmilerMan. Jack hit Owen and he went flying into a wall knocking him out. TheSmilerMan punched Jack. Jack turned around and picked TheSmilerMan up by his neck and started to squeeze. TheSmilerMan started coughing and choking. The Controller watched and laughed. "Come on! I don't have all day. Kill him"


Tomorrow will be the first in the two part season finale of this years Altonville Mystery. You have until 6pm tomorrow to get your guesses in as to who the Controller is!
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Sat Oct 29, 2016 8:07 pm

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I upgraded them to be fabulous for no reason what so ever.


Dom are you sure you aren't the controller?
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Sun Oct 30, 2016 6:27 am

Time for my personal guess. Let's put some evidence together, shall we?

Described as a male in his late 20s, the survivor was found by Phalanx Operatives during a routine sweep of the area to ensure the continued containment of the Nemesis virus...

...So the Controller was the man who survived the destruction of the village. How did he survive for three months in nothing but rubble and fire.


So this narrows us down to specifically Males in their late twenties... All further guesses, consider this. Out of people I think Dom could use there's himself (28), Dan (29) and Adz (28). There are obviously others, but the others don't list their forum ages (eg Justin might be about that age). I'm personally going to guess Dan as he hasn't appeared in the story yet, but I think Dom has a bit of suspicion around him too ;)

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